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  1. Posted: February 14, 2017In: Student Loglines

    A group of criminals see their escape from prison when an infamous prison breaker arrive. The problem however : he doesn’t want to escape anymore.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 14, 2017 at 10:53 am

    I would give the lead character?an understandable reason to be desperate to escape from prison. Something that will make the audience like him and hope he succeeds. How about this: ----- "When an infamous prisoner (Known for breaking out of any prison) is transferred to his cell block; a convict desRead more

    I would give the lead character?an understandable reason to be desperate to escape from prison. Something that will make the audience like him and hope he succeeds. How about this:
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    “When an infamous prisoner (Known for breaking out of any prison) is transferred to his cell block; a convict desperate to see his dying wife sees his chance to escape, but problems arise when he discovers the notorious criminal no longer desires escape.”
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  2. Posted: February 12, 2017In: Student Loglines

    When the livestock of a small farming community comes under attack from a mysterious predator the sheriff gathers a coalition of the willing to venture into the woods to find and kill the animal. However as they trek further and further into the woods, they are killed off one by one and the sheriff, realizing one of them is the monster in disguise, must solve the mystery of who?s the killer. *This one feels messier then the previous one but how do I accentuate the details whilst still keeping it brief?

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2017 at 10:12 am

    Possible title: The Beast Within

    Possible title: The Beast Within

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  3. Posted: February 12, 2017In: Student Loglines

    When the livestock of a small farming community comes under attack from a mysterious predator the sheriff gathers a coalition of the willing to venture into the woods to find and kill the animal. However as they trek further and further into the woods, they are killed off one by one and the sheriff, realizing one of them is the monster in disguise, must solve the mystery of who?s the killer. *This one feels messier then the previous one but how do I accentuate the details whilst still keeping it brief?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 13, 2017 at 10:12 am

    I have to admit this is not the easiest one to write a logline for, because there are two inciting incidents, the livestock mutilations/killings which set the hunters after the beast, and when the hunters begin to be killed one by one. Here is another attempt: ---------------------------------------Read more

    I have to admit this is not the easiest one to write a logline for, because there are two inciting incidents, the livestock mutilations/killings which set the hunters after the beast, and when the hunters begin to be killed one by one. Here is another attempt:
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    “When a group of hunters are killed off one by one while tracking a beast that’s mutilated their livestock, a grizzled sheriff must discover who, or what the beast is now that they have become it’s prey.”

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