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After being rejected by his Italo-American mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer decides to exact revenge by building his own criminal empire and destroying his father's.
Because you say his goal is destroying his father, you don't need to say exact revenge or vice versa. ----- "Rejected by his mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer build's his own criminal empire to destroy his father." ----- ----- "Rejected by his mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer exacts revenge byRead more
Because you say his goal is destroying his father, you don’t need to say exact revenge or vice versa.
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“Rejected by his mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer build’s his own criminal empire to destroy his father.”
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“Rejected by his mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer exacts revenge by building his own criminal empire.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessWhen a volcanic eruption grounds all flights, a desperate racing driver must evade highway patrolmen to transport his dying fianc? heart transplant.
I like the premise, but I have to admit to reading the logline twice before I got it. 1: The race car driver should already have several speeding tickets. One more ticket and he loses his license and thus his livelihood. Up the stakes. (Just a thought, doesn't have to be in the logline) 2:There shouRead more
I like the premise, but I have to admit to reading the logline twice before I got it.
1: The race car driver should already have several speeding tickets. One more ticket and he loses his license and thus his livelihood. Up the stakes. (Just a thought, doesn’t have to be in the logline)
2:There should be someone chasing him that has a personal vendetta against the race care driver, for instance, a mean ex boyfriend of his fiance, who has a grudge, and happens to be a state patrolman. That would personalize the chase. give a face to those chasing him. (Should be in the logline)
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“When all flights are cancelled due to a volcanic eruption. a desperate race car driver must evade a vindictive highway patrolman while racing to get his fiance’s hart transplant to her surgeon.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!!
When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
If I could shorten it I would, usually good at the. Still I think a pretty good logline if a little overlong
If I could shorten it I would, usually good at the. Still I think a pretty good logline if a little overlong
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