1. Posted: January 22, 2014In:

    When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.

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    I still am not convinced you need to say he's a "Long Haul" trucker because in the logline you talk about him crossing the Nullarbor (or Outback) which would imply "long haul" trucker.

    I still am not convinced you need to say he’s a “Long Haul” trucker because in the logline you talk about him crossing the Nullarbor (or Outback) which would imply “long haul” trucker.

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2014In:

    An extroverted overweight attorney-turned-actress falls in love with an introverted younger personal trainer and embarks on a life-changing romance. Even though they both know from the beginning that they want different things in life and their time together is limited, they risk their hearts to learn from each other until it is time to say goodbye.

    Richiev Singularity

    I wonder if this is a script that should have a traditional style logline. It seems more of a slice of life piece than a movie with a plot.

    I wonder if this is a script that should have a traditional style logline. It seems more of a slice of life piece than a movie with a plot.

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  3. Posted: January 23, 2014In:

    It's February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.

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    "To drum up business for his failing business, a Mortician begins creating customers the hard way: By Murder"

    “To drum up business for his failing business, a Mortician begins creating customers the hard way: By Murder”

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