1. Posted: August 29, 2013In:

    After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

    Richiev Singularity

    Good point dpg Maybe when she was an Angel champion she was battling demons because it was her job but didn't really care much for humans. She was just battling evil because it was evil. When she gets amnesia and lives among the humans she gets a new perspective. That would be the internal journey oRead more

    Good point dpg

    Maybe when she was an Angel champion she was battling demons because it was her job but didn’t really care much for humans. She was just battling evil because it was evil.

    When she gets amnesia and lives among the humans she gets a new perspective. That would be the internal journey of the character.

    (Of course that would involve flashbacks which I am not a fan of)

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  2. Posted: August 29, 2013In:

    After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

    Richiev Singularity

    How about this one: ----- "After being attacked by demons, a teenage amnesic must discover who or what she is if she's to defeat the evil horde that has targeted her." ----- I now realize the inciting incident isn't when she wakes from her coma but when she's attacked by demons and discover's she maRead more

    How about this one:
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    “After being attacked by demons, a teenage amnesic must discover who or what she is if she’s to defeat the evil horde that has targeted her.”
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    I now realize the inciting incident isn’t when she wakes from her coma but when she’s attacked by demons and discover’s she may not be entirely human.

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2013In:

    After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

    Richiev Singularity

    Thanks for the feedback guys. This is a logline only atm and you are making good points. 1) The lead is and Angel sent to earth to battle the forces of Evil 2) she is betrayed (Attacked) by an angel she thought was her ally. 3) At the beginning of the movie she doesn't know she's an Angel. (She beliRead more

    Thanks for the feedback guys. This is a logline only atm and you are making good points.

    1) The lead is and Angel sent to earth to battle the forces of Evil
    2) she is betrayed (Attacked) by an angel she thought was her ally.
    3) At the beginning of the movie she doesn’t know she’s an Angel. (She believes she is just an average teenage girl)
    4) When she is attacked by demons, she discovers she has powers and my not be a typical teenage girl.
    5) Her journey is that of discovering what she is and what her mission is.
    6) There will be a final showdown at the end battling the Angel that betrayed her.
    7) There will be a human sidekick that observes her journey of self discovery.

    That is what I have in my head so far.

    Two more things.

    First: God and the Devil have a pact about what they can and can’t do on Earth. Her job as an Angel has been that of enforcer. When the Devils minions break the rules, she’s the one that battles them, sending them back to hell.

    Second: She may be the Angel of Death, The one riding the pale horse in revelation. (I am not set on that yet, but if so, the title would probably be “Angel of Death” instead of “Fallen Angel.”

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