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William Van Alen?s building of the Chrysler building and the competition to be the first to complete the world?s tallest building.
You should add who he's racing against to build the worlds tallest building, otherwise the logline doesn't make sense, there have been other worlds tallest buildings, such as the empire state building.
You should add who he’s racing against to build the worlds tallest building, otherwise the logline doesn’t make sense, there have been other worlds tallest buildings, such as the empire state building.
See lessWhen Jacob, a genteel theater actor, becomes a mob boss through mistaken identity. He is forced to work with Mia a police detective, in order to incarcerate the notorious Big Bamzy and save his own life. This is a logline for the narrative of a 10 episode TV comedy series.
A good concept, Plenty of room for laughs. "The man who new to little" with Bill Murray had a similar premise except he's mistaken for a super spy not a mob boss; you might want to check out that movie, but overall this idea is different enough I think it will work well. Good luck with this!
A good concept, Plenty of room for laughs. “The man who new to little” with Bill Murray had a similar premise except he’s mistaken for a super spy not a mob boss; you might want to check out that movie, but overall this idea is different enough I think it will work well.
Good luck with this!
See lessWhen a young bride of an American couple living in Italy is surprised by a pregnancy, she will do all she can to hide the baby bump before her homesick husband decides to pull the plug on her Tuscan paradise and her budding art career.
Saying "Wife of an American couple is a little bit confusing." ----- "When a young bride discovers she's pregnant, she conspires to keep it from her husband so he won't pull the plug on their Tuscan paradise." ----- My attempt isn't perfect but it does cut the word count without changing the meaningRead more
Saying “Wife of an American couple is a little bit confusing.”
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“When a young bride discovers she’s pregnant, she conspires to keep it from her husband so he won’t pull the plug on their Tuscan paradise.”
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My attempt isn’t perfect but it does cut the word count without changing the meaning.
(My question is, why would the husband want to leave? They have hospitals in Italy)
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