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Set in the 70's when many people are fleeing from brutal totalitarian regimes to pursue their dreams in the land of freedom and opportunity, Australia. However, when?Communist agents?team up with corrupt police the 'Croatian Six' realise their nightmare has only just begun.
This is an interesting set-up for a story. However a logline is usually told from the point of view of the lead character. It gives the character a goal and tells who or what is standing in the way. I can't tell who the lead character is from your logline. Is it one of the corrupt police officers orRead more
This is an interesting set-up for a story.
However a logline is usually told from the point of view of the lead character. It gives the character a goal and tells who or what is standing in the way.
I can’t tell who the lead character is from your logline. Is it one of the corrupt police officers or possibly one of the communist agents?
I think this is a great idea for a story and if you focus on the lead character, your logline will better reflect your stories potential.
Hope that helps, good luck with this!
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This is a second attempt if I remember correct, the first one was actually more confusing. Nick is correct. You have given us a tons of information now you have to cut it down and clarify a bit. He gives good advice.
This is a second attempt if I remember correct, the first one was actually more confusing.
Nick is correct. You have given us a tons of information now you have to cut it down and clarify a bit. He gives good advice.
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Just curious, is the story about the train ride, or the Sanitarium? I couldn't tell from the logline.
Just curious, is the story about the train ride, or the Sanitarium? I couldn’t tell from the logline.
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