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  1. Posted: May 14, 2013In: Public

    A twisted love story of wanton revenge and murder when a teen, accidentally killed by the Mother Superior at his Catholic school, returns from the dead to seek revenge.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 3:39 am

    Who is the lead character, from whose perspective are we seeing the events unfold?

    Who is the lead character, from whose perspective are we seeing the events unfold?

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  2. Posted: May 14, 2013In: Public

    Retired movie people living in a once-grand hotel, fight the wrecking ball to save their home and earn a new lease on life.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 3:37 am

    While you have given us a situation, You haven't told us who the lead character is. "Retired movie people" is vague. Also, a wrecking ball" isn't a good "Bad guy" you should tell us who is behind the wrecking ball. However, this idea has potential. What if the lead was an old time hero of westerns?Read more

    While you have given us a situation, You haven’t told us who the lead character is. “Retired movie people” is vague.

    Also, a wrecking ball” isn’t a good “Bad guy” you should tell us who is behind the wrecking ball.

    However, this idea has potential. What if the lead was an old time hero of westerns?

    “A retired movie cowboy must put his spurs on one last time to save his beloved hotel when a greedy land developer conspires with the city council to tear it down.”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this

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  3. Posted: May 12, 2013In: Public

    A group of friends come across a mysterious abandoned town in the middle of nowhere while on a roadtrip. When they decide to stop and explore, strange things start happening. A burned down school, homes left to rot, and an old asylum have them running from something they can't see. With more questions than answers, will the be able to escape the town, or will they too vanish like the residents of Culberson?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 12, 2013 at 11:50 am

    "When a stoner philosopher and his friends are mysteriously trapped in an abandoned town, they must discover what befell the residents if they are to escape the same fate." I tried shortening it a little, I added "Stoner Philosopher" but you should change it to reflect the characteristics of your leRead more

    “When a stoner philosopher and his friends are mysteriously trapped in an abandoned town, they must discover what befell the residents if they are to escape the same fate.”

    I tried shortening it a little, I added “Stoner Philosopher” but you should change it to reflect the characteristics of your lead character.

    Hope that helps, good luck with this!

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