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  1. Posted: May 9, 2013In: Public

    A greedy madam use the power of voodoo to force young girls into prostitution, till the day when one of them unexpectedly find a way for fight against her.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 12, 2013 at 11:43 am

    I like this second attempt better. But dpg is right, If the prostitute who fights against the madam is the lead then the logline should reflect that.

    I like this second attempt better. But dpg is right, If the prostitute who fights against the madam is the lead then the logline should reflect that.

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  2. Posted: May 10, 2013

    The death of their child prompts a grieving couple to perform a ritual that brings her back to life, but a violation of the ritual?s rules has horrific consequences for the couples friends and family.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 12, 2013 at 11:40 am

    You have to be a little careful because this idea has been done before. Re-animator and Pet Cemetery had the same basic premise as well. Doesn't mean you shouldn't do it, just try to give it a good twist so it stands out. Good luck with this!

    You have to be a little careful because this idea has been done before. Re-animator and Pet Cemetery had the same basic premise as well.

    Doesn’t mean you shouldn’t do it, just try to give it a good twist so it stands out.

    Good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2013In: Public

    When a loving man lets his wife be detained in a mental hospital because she keeps seeing their dead son, he starts seeing the boy himself. After a long mental struggle he finally accepts his wife wasn’t mentally ill after all and he lets her back in only to find out she isn’t his wife anymore, but possessed by a demon which already took their son in the past. If he really loves her, he has to kill her. (just as she did with their son in the past)

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    Added an answer on May 12, 2013 at 11:36 am

    "When a no nonsense doctor discovers his mentally ill wife is actually possessed by a demon, he must discover how to exorcise the creature, because his last resort is to kill her" Sorry, my attempt at a logline still isn't quite there but I was trying to cut down the word count, hope that helped a lRead more

    “When a no nonsense doctor discovers his mentally ill wife is actually possessed by a demon, he must discover how to exorcise the creature, because his last resort is to kill her”

    Sorry, my attempt at a logline still isn’t quite there but I was trying to cut down the word count, hope that helped a little, good luck with this!

    (btw if this hasn’t been written yet, the perfect ending would be for him to kill his wife in order to save her, then the audience finds out the lead is the one who is actually crazy and his wife wasn’t really possessed)

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