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Set in the future, the survivors of the world leave the on a ship destined to a new planet but their safety is compromised when passengers are murdered.
This is a good idea, but vague. Who is the lead character. Is it a passenger? Is it the person investigating the murders? Is it the killer?
This is a good idea, but vague.
Who is the lead character. Is it a passenger? Is it the person investigating the murders? Is it the killer?
See lessThe MI6 is troubled by the possible existence of a voice technology that could recreate all human speeches ever made.
You really need a protagonist, Mi6 is impersonal. Also, "Troubled" isn't that compelling. It recreates all human speeches ever made? Does this mean it could recreate the "All we have to fear is fear itself" speech. And if so, why is that a bad thing? Finally you don't say what the worst thing that cRead more
You really need a protagonist, Mi6 is impersonal.
Also, “Troubled” isn’t that compelling.
It recreates all human speeches ever made? Does this mean it could recreate the “All we have to fear is fear itself” speech. And if so, why is that a bad thing?
Finally you don’t say what the worst thing that could happen if this technology exists.
After an Mi6 officer discovers a technology that can perfectly recreate any speech pattern, he must find it’s creator or (This bad thing will happen)
See lessMick is placed in charge of security USB key containing a top secret list of field agents… which gets accidentally eaten by his Scottish Terrier, McCloud. )
You are missing the... "And now he must" part of the logline. When a promotion hungry agent's Scottish Terrier eats a USB key that holds national secrets, the agent must now... (Do this) ... (or else this will happen)
You are missing the… “And now he must” part of the logline.
When a promotion hungry agent’s Scottish Terrier eats a USB key that holds national secrets, the agent must now… (Do this) … (or else this will happen)
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