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  1. Posted: November 7, 2012In: Public

    A man planning to commit suicide becomes the soul survivor of a commercial jet airline crash plus the investigations number one suspect as a terrorist involved in bringing the flight down but most importantly he is reborn, discovering the things in life he previously thought of no value: love, empathy & revolution.

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    Added an answer on November 7, 2012 at 9:45 am

    This is a second shot, I noticed I didn't give an antagonist in my first try: "When a suicidal man survives a plane crash he rediscovers his love for life but when a desperate homeland security agent claims he's a terrorist, he must prove his innocence in order to keep it."

    This is a second shot, I noticed I didn’t give an antagonist in my first try:

    “When a suicidal man survives a plane crash he rediscovers his love for life but when a desperate homeland security agent claims he’s a terrorist, he must prove his innocence in order to keep it.”

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  2. Posted: November 7, 2012In: Public

    A man planning to commit suicide becomes the soul survivor of a commercial jet airline crash plus the investigations number one suspect as a terrorist involved in bringing the flight down but most importantly he is reborn, discovering the things in life he previously thought of no value: love, empathy & revolution.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 7, 2012 at 9:29 am

    You logline is a bit wordy. How about something like: When a suicidal man survives a plane crash, he rediscovers life but he must prove he isn't a terrorist in order to keep it.

    You logline is a bit wordy. How about something like:

    When a suicidal man survives a plane crash, he rediscovers life but he must prove he isn’t a terrorist in order to keep it.

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2012In: Public

    It?s 2087 and for the past fifteen years, the government has implanted everyone with chips that record the last ten minutes of memory. In murder cases, the chips are used by Recall Judge?s to find the killer and now, a rookie has his first case which may involve his boss, the Head Recall judge.

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    Added an answer on November 3, 2012 at 2:42 am

    Just for fun, I would start the script with several Recall Judges gathered around "Studying" the last ten minutes of a billionaires life. He died having sex with his nubile young wife and from his perspective we see the wife bouncing up and down going at it. The judges are of course caught by a femaRead more

    Just for fun, I would start the script with several Recall Judges gathered around “Studying” the last ten minutes of a billionaires life. He died having sex with his nubile young wife and from his perspective we see the wife bouncing up and down going at it. The judges are of course caught by a female superior and scatter.

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