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  1. Posted: September 16, 2012

    A battle of wills ensues between a preacher and a criminal leader after a gang botches a robbery, escapes into the church and holds the congregation hostage.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 17, 2012 at 9:14 pm

    That is an interesting Idea Filmstar, I was defiantly going in a different direction. Growing up I did go to many different churches, there is always drama. Maybe the bad guy could, "Tell the truth" sort of like spike in season four of Buffy. Disrupting but also solving some of the problems betweenRead more

    That is an interesting Idea Filmstar, I was defiantly going in a different direction.

    Growing up I did go to many different churches, there is always drama. Maybe the bad guy could, “Tell the truth” sort of like spike in season four of Buffy. Disrupting but also solving some of the problems between church goers.

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  2. Posted: September 16, 2012

    A battle of wills ensues between a preacher and a criminal leader after a gang botches a robbery, escapes into the church and holds the congregation hostage.

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    Added an answer on September 17, 2012 at 9:10 pm

    That is a good point Nicholas, The battle of wills I had in mind was, The criminal leader is someone who is very angry at God. The last place he wants to be is stuck in a church. The preacher just wants the congregation to make it out alive. I am thinking the leader may have even committed the robbeRead more

    That is a good point Nicholas, The battle of wills I had in mind was, The criminal leader is someone who is very angry at God. The last place he wants to be is stuck in a church. The preacher just wants the congregation to make it out alive.

    I am thinking the leader may have even committed the robbery for a good reason. A relative that needs an operation. A company that screwed over it’s employees But he doesn’t want to go to jail, is desperate and not happy being stuck in a church.

    I am not sure how to say all that in one line though.

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  3. Posted: September 16, 2012

    A battle of wills ensues between a preacher and a criminal leader after a gang botches a robbery, escapes into the church and holds the congregation hostage.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 16, 2012 at 11:52 pm

    The Preacher but I am not sure I should portray the criminal leader as the 'Bad guy' either, just different sets of goals. Basically I am looking for a single location script Idea that could be made for a low or even micro budget.

    The Preacher but I am not sure I should portray the criminal leader as the ‘Bad guy’ either, just different sets of goals.

    Basically I am looking for a single location script Idea that could be made for a low or even micro budget.

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