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An emotionally stunted musician hits the road with an aspiring producer in order to track down the woman who has been the subject of all his work since she broke his heart in high school.
I can see Andrews point. Maybe hinting towards a goal in the logline is a good idea. "After the failure of his last two albums, A rock legend goes on a quest to find the subject of his biggest hits; the girl who broke his heart in high school. You could also tag on something like, "but will findingRead more
I can see Andrews point. Maybe hinting towards a goal in the logline is a good idea.
“After the failure of his last two albums, A rock legend goes on a quest to find the subject of his biggest hits; the girl who broke his heart in high school.
You could also tag on something like, “but will finding his muse rekindle his passion for the music” or you could add, “and along the way he finds himself”
But since I don’t know the entire story these are just guesses.
See lessAn emotionally stunted musician hits the road with an aspiring producer in order to track down the woman who has been the subject of all his work since she broke his heart in high school.
This is a great idea for a story, I am surprised it hasn't been done before. Is emotionally stunted and musician redundant? (I kid, I kid) I wonder if "His muse" would work instead of "the subject of all his work?" (Just and idea)
This is a great idea for a story, I am surprised it hasn’t been done before.
Is emotionally stunted and musician redundant? (I kid, I kid)
I wonder if “His muse” would work instead of “the subject of all his work?” (Just and idea)
See lessIn 1996, five best friends discover an abandoned truckload of bush weed dumped in a roadside rest area in outback Australia. Cashing in on their lucky find, the young men take control of the local gunja trade and are thrust into an underworld of Calabrian Mafia, outlaw bikers, Woodcutters from Hell, truckers and speed-dealing milk bar owners, all looking for their cut of the score.
Cashing in on the discovery of a truckload of bush weed, five friends soon discover everyone wants a cut.
Cashing in on the discovery of a truckload of bush weed, five friends soon discover everyone wants a cut.
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