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After returning to the present from a horrifying future he is responsible for, a disillusioned software developer must bring down the corporate giant he works for.
This one still needs work. (although it's getting better) You don't need to say "to the present" because if you say "After returning from a horrifying future" it implies he is coming back to where he started. Corporations are by nature giant so you could get away with just saying corporation withoutRead more
This one still needs work. (although it’s getting better)
You don’t need to say “to the present” because if you say “After returning from a horrifying future” it implies he is coming back to where he started.
Corporations are by nature giant so you could get away with just saying corporation without changing the meaning.
“After returning from a horrifying future, a software developer must bring down the corporation he works for” -or-
Then I would add something after the “or”
BTW I like the title, “Before Tomorrow Comes”
See lessAfter the failure of his last two albums, an emotionally stunted rock legend hits the road with an aspiring producer in order to track down the inspiration behind his greatest hits: his former high school sweetheart.
I like this logline better, it takes elements from the suggestions but keeps some of the original. Two possible titles: Finding Amanda About a girl
I like this logline better, it takes elements from the suggestions but keeps some of the original.
Two possible titles:
Finding Amanda
About a girl
See lessFired for her role in an accidental poisoning, a workaholic restaurant manager forges her own restaurant in defiance of her guilt and evil ex-boss, discovering that success alone won't heal her.
The poisoning is going to be tricky, because a manager of the restaurant is ultimately responsible for an accidental poisoning. Possibly the cheapskate owner, orders her to use food past its used-by date. She refuses and tells the owner off. After she leaves the kitchen the owner threatens a differeRead more
The poisoning is going to be tricky, because a manager of the restaurant is ultimately responsible for an accidental poisoning.
Possibly the cheapskate owner, orders her to use food past its used-by date. She refuses and tells the owner off. After she leaves the kitchen the owner threatens a different employee to use the food. (Someone with lots of kids and can’t afford to be fired)
When the patron gets food poisoning, The owner publicly blames her, Uses her as a scape goat claiming, the use of rotten food was because of her incompetence and all her idea.
She is fired and a pariah in the neighborhood.
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