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  1. Posted: September 21, 2012In: Public

    An abstinent Christian dating coach's societal standing crumbles upon trying to win back the university whore he has impregnated.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 21, 2012 at 1:20 pm

    Okay; after reading this about twenty times I finally deciphered what you were saying. "An abstinence coach finds his job in peril when it comes to light he has fathered a child out of wedlock."

    Okay; after reading this about twenty times I finally deciphered what you were saying.

    “An abstinence coach finds his job in peril when it comes to light he has fathered a child out of wedlock.”

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  2. Posted: September 21, 2012In: Public

    A flamboyantly ghetto man must care for his rich estranged grandmother as a live-in in her haunted house in this horror genre spoof.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 21, 2012 at 12:27 pm

    I like the premise: Here is a shot at a logline that adds a goal for the protagonist and a possible obstacle. "A street hustler becomes his estranged grandmothers live-in caretaker in order to get into her will, but will his plans be derailed when he finds the mansion is haunted." You could also addRead more

    I like the premise: Here is a shot at a logline that adds a goal for the protagonist and a possible obstacle.

    “A street hustler becomes his estranged grandmothers live-in caretaker in order to get into her will, but will his plans be derailed when he finds the mansion is haunted.”

    You could also add something like, — by an over protective ghost. — This gives an obstacle, the ghost is protecting the grandmother from his attempt to scam his way into the Will.
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    Just a thought, what if he wasn’t really her long lost grandson but just pretending to be for an inheritance.

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  3. Posted: September 21, 2012In: Public

    An abstinent Christian dating coach's societal standing crumbles upon trying to win back the university whore he has impregnated.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 21, 2012 at 11:17 am

    This logline is very confusing. How did he impregnate "The Whore" if he is abstinent He is dating "Coach's societal standing." Seems like an odd thing to date. Is it a girl? I do like the title of the movie; "Chastity."

    This logline is very confusing.

    How did he impregnate “The Whore” if he is abstinent

    He is dating “Coach’s societal standing.” Seems like an odd thing to date. Is it a girl?

    I do like the title of the movie; “Chastity.”

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