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A young, unsuccessful musician finds a second-hand guitar that unlocks her ability to create amazing sound. But as her powers grow, she discovers that there is a price ? and it must be paid in blood.
"I remember everything! I was barely seventeen and I once killed a boy with a fender guitar..." --JIm Steinman. (That quote is from memory) ----------- An interesting take on the "Sold my soul for Rock N Roll" theme. I am not sure I would use both young and unsuccessful. "A down on her luck musicianRead more
“I remember everything! I was barely seventeen and I once killed a boy with a fender guitar…” –JIm Steinman. (That quote is from memory)
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An interesting take on the “Sold my soul for Rock N Roll” theme.
I am not sure I would use both young and unsuccessful.
“A down on her luck musician find magical guitar, but soon discovers there is a price- Paid in blood.”
(To be honest the original logline is pretty good)
See lessA flamboyantly ghetto man must care for his rich estranged grandmother as a live-in in her haunted house in this horror genre spoof.
I like the concept, it is something that I could see Eddie Murphy or Sinbad doing when they were younger. If you decide to go longer than 7 pages, then it would be a good idea to give the protagonist a reason to look around the house. He believes a family heirloom is hidden somewhere in the mansion.Read more
I like the concept, it is something that I could see Eddie Murphy or Sinbad doing when they were younger.
If you decide to go longer than 7 pages, then it would be a good idea to give the protagonist a reason to look around the house.
He believes a family heirloom is hidden somewhere in the mansion. Maybe the heirloom was supposed to go to his (now deceased) mother but the Grandma cheated her out of it. (or at least that is what he believes)
He is determined to find the heirloom but the over protective ghost keeps getting in his way. Plus the longer he’s in the mansion, the more his is frustration mounts at having to be nice to the Grandma.
Anyway, just some ideas.
See lessAn inexperienced lawyer becomes the centre of a hate campaign when his client is accused of hiding an identity that once brought a reign of terror to the world.
This logline is much clearer. Since the accusation (I assume) will be brought on early in the movie, would it give anything away to say something like: "An inexperienced lawyer becomes the center of a hate campaign when his client is accused of being the Devil" "An idealistic lawyer and his family aRead more
This logline is much clearer.
Since the accusation (I assume) will be brought on early in the movie, would it give anything away to say something like:
“An inexperienced lawyer becomes the center of a hate campaign when his client is accused of being the Devil”
“An idealistic lawyer and his family are targeted by religious fanatics when his client is accused, by an over zealous reporter, of being the Devil.”
I know; both those are a still a bit clunky.
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