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  1. Posted: October 13, 2012In: Public

    Upon becoming the most powerful man in the world, a young Cesar grows drunk on power, but after his beloved sister's death he finds, if he wants to become a God, he must cling to sanity.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 13, 2012 at 6:59 pm

    A note: This script idea is based on history, not the adult movie made in the seventies.

    A note: This script idea is based on history, not the adult movie made in the seventies.

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  2. Posted: October 6, 2012In: Public

    An ordinary student finds himself trapped in a room by an advanced extraterrestrial branch. In order to escape he must overcome an endless ordeal of mazes and puzzles that transcend space time

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 7, 2012 at 7:55 am

    Extraterrestrial branch? Is that from a space tree? I would change the wording, don't know what that means. Even though this logline is a bit clunky, I get the sense of the movie from it. "Saw with Aliens." You don't need to say 'ordinary' student. Just student should be fine. 'Endless' ordeal of maRead more

    Extraterrestrial branch? Is that from a space tree? I would change the wording, don’t know what that means.

    Even though this logline is a bit clunky, I get the sense of the movie from it. “Saw with Aliens.”

    You don’t need to say ‘ordinary’ student. Just student should be fine.

    ‘Endless’ ordeal of mazes. You should rethink the use of the word endless (Unless at the end of the movie he is trapped for all time in the maze.

    Not a bad log line. It seems to be all there except the wording.

    Who: Student
    Situation: trapped in a room/maze
    Goal: Escape.
    Bad guy: Creepy alien branch

    Few minor changes and it should be good.

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  3. Posted: September 26, 2012In: Public

    A spoiled teen is sent to live with her Grandfather who is the storyteller for his tribe; will she have the worst summer of her life or will she relent and learn about her heritage.

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    Added an answer on September 29, 2012 at 11:02 am

    Some great ideas. I had seen this as a coming of age story. A young girl hangs out at the mall (Facebook?) with her friends, a little spoiled and the last thing she wants to do; spend the summer with her grandfather on the reservation. Originally, (once she warms up to her Grandfather) she was goingRead more

    Some great ideas.

    I had seen this as a coming of age story. A young girl hangs out at the mall (Facebook?) with her friends, a little spoiled and the last thing she wants to do; spend the summer with her grandfather on the reservation.

    Originally, (once she warms up to her Grandfather) she was going to ask to tell a story at the campfire (Something the grandfather does for the kids of the tribe) He say, only if she learns it perfect, word for word. The movie ends with the grandfather dying and at the funeral, she tells the story he taught to her. (She has finally accepted her heritage)

    But I do like the idea that it could be about something bigger. Maybe he’s the last storyteller of his tribe and she must carry on his tradition or the tribe may lose the stories forever. Even if it’s about her helping him record the stories in order to save them.

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