1. Posted: April 4, 2020In:

    When a young law clerk is pursued by the police because his senior partner has implicated him in a criminal enterprise he must embroil his boss in the crime to save himself.

    Richiev Singularity

    This logline answers it's own dramatic question. His boss implicates him in a crime So the lead testifies against his boss. Problem solved Now if the lead character refused to implicate his boss, then we would have dramatic tension.

    This logline answers it’s own dramatic question.

    His boss implicates him in a crime

    So the lead testifies against his boss.

    Problem solved

    Now if the lead character refused to implicate his boss, then we would have dramatic tension.

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2020In:

    An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.

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    Richiev Singularity

    Where is the conflict? (And what are the stakes?)

    Where is the conflict? (And what are the stakes?)

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2020In:

    When his former lover is killed, an immortal cowboy rises from the dead teams up with a teenage girl to kill those are responsible.

    Richiev Singularity

    From a technical standpoint, this is your best-formatted logline.

    From a technical standpoint, this is your best-formatted logline.

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