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A mobster take down drug lords and rescues a former child actor before he dies.
From reading this, it doesn't seem that the Mobster is the lead character, and a logline should be written from that point of view So it is either one of the "Two Men" or the "Former child Actor" Once you narrow that down you need to give that lead character a goal and something needs to be standingRead more
From reading this, it doesn’t seem that the Mobster is the lead character, and a logline should be written from that point of view
So it is either one of the “Two Men” or the “Former child Actor”
Once you narrow that down you need to give that lead character a goal and something needs to be standing in the way of their goal.
See lessAfter finally arriving home after months in hospital with leukemia, a pragmatic pharmaceutical statistician struggles with ?normal? life as he builds himself back up to running 10k races again.
I really like the idea. As for the logline, my question would be... What are the stakes? (What will the lead character lose if he doesn't build himself back into running shape?)
I really like the idea. As for the logline, my question would be…
What are the stakes? (What will the lead character lose if he doesn’t build himself back into running shape?)
See lessWhen dark and disturbing children’s drawings come alive. Its creator, a little girl distressed and insecure, must face and erase these drawings from her life before they control her forever.
I like the premise, has a Stephen King feel to it. Especially if the little girl was put up to, Drawing her fears, by a "Randolf Flagg" Type character pretending to be a child psychiatrist. Here is an attempt but it will probably need to be tweaked, to more fully represent the story you have writtenRead more
I like the premise, has a Stephen King feel to it.
Especially if the little girl was put up to, Drawing her fears, by a “Randolf Flagg” Type character pretending to be a child psychiatrist.
Here is an attempt but it will probably need to be tweaked, to more fully represent the story you have written (or the story you visualize)
“When her drawings come alive, a terrified 5-year-old has until midnight to overcome each one of the fears her drawings represent or be sucked into her paintings forever.”
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