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Logline: A man marries the woman he drugged and date raped. His journey to get help leaves a trail discovered by her twin sister that forces his wife to make a decision between her husband and her family.
Just as a technical logline writing point:1: I wouldn't start a logline with the back story.2: And along those same lines, I wouldn't end the story with the lead having to "Make a decision"Instead, I would start with the forward story and describe the action, and not the lead characters' inner strugRead more
Just as a technical logline writing point:
1: I wouldn’t start a logline with the back story.
2: And along those same lines, I wouldn’t end the story with the lead having to “Make a decision”
Instead, I would start with the forward story and describe the action, and not the lead characters’ inner struggle. (Inner struggle is great for the script, I’m just talking about the logline)
“When she discovers her seemingly perfect husband was the one who drugged and raped her ten years ago, a determined housewife must find a way to escape her marriage before her sociopathic partner realizes; she knows.”
(Something along those lines anyway, not entirely sure of your plot so some of that was just guesswork)
See lessWhen the city is devoured by war. A surviving girl on the verge of madness and a hungry old rat cross their lonely paths in order to find their salvation.
What does salvation look like on the screen?If it's to escape the city, then you should say, "escape the city"If it's to find food for her loved ones who are starving, then you should say that.Because, if you say the lead character's goal is to find salvation, then you should tell us what salvationRead more
What does salvation look like on the screen?
If it’s to escape the city, then you should say, “escape the city”
If it’s to find food for her loved ones who are starving, then you should say that.
Because, if you say the lead character’s goal is to find salvation, then you should tell us what salvation means to the lead character.
See lessA computer hacker uses a computer that turns back time so that he stop a young woman turned cyborg from invading his town.
Cool, now you have added conflict.The next step would be to determine where the main story begins.Since the goal of the main character is to save his town, then the main story begins when his town is threatened.
Cool, now you have added conflict.
The next step would be to determine where the main story begins.
Since the goal of the main character is to save his town, then the main story begins when his town is threatened.
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