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Brendan has mental issues because he was molested by his parents as a child, so when he becomes older, he goes on a bloody rampage declaring he’s God.
Going on a rampage is not a goal, it is an action. At his core, what does your lead character truly want?
Going on a rampage is not a goal, it is an action. At his core, what does your lead character truly want?
See lessThe weight of the world is strenuous on Mother Earth’s shoulders doing her best remaining solid, but the world is pushing her to a breaking point.
Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
Who is the lead character?
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What is standing in their way?
Grieving the loss of her best friend, Donna sits inside of an empty church beside Brittany’s closed casket explaining how she wishes she would’ve done something to prevent her death.
This is more of a situation than a story. In a story, a lead character has a goal, but something stands in the way of that goal. In your logline, nothing stops the lead character from explaining how she wishes she would've done something to prevent her best friend's death. It could be a story probleRead more
This is more of a situation than a story.
In a story, a lead character has a goal, but something stands in the way of that goal. In your logline, nothing stops the lead character from explaining how she wishes she would’ve done something to prevent her best friend’s death.
It could be a story problem or it could be that your logline does not truly get across to the reader the central conflict of the story.
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