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An assassin embroiled in a plot against Queen Victoria is psychically attacked by a mysterious cult, flooding her mind with memories from a madman and inflaming her to pursue the cult’s destruction.
You say the Assassin is psychically attacked by the cult making her want to pursue the cult's destruction.
You say the Assassin is psychically attacked by the cult making her want to pursue the cult’s destruction.
See lessAn assassin embroiled in a plot against Queen Victoria is psychically attacked by a mysterious cult, flooding her mind with memories from a madman and inflaming her to pursue the cult’s destruction.
A bit confusing. Why would the cult want to make the assassin want to destroy their own cult?
A bit confusing. Why would the cult want to make the assassin want to destroy their own cult?
See lessFamilies must take the law into their own hands after they discover the new neighbors aren’t the perfect family everyone thought they were.
A logline must be compelling, it's what sells the story to the industry. Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific. There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal. The event should alsoRead more
A logline must be compelling, it’s what sells the story to the industry.
Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific.
There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal.
The event should also be horrific enough that the reader will understand why it might compel an ordinary person to take the law into their own hands.
Finally, there should be stakes of some sort if the lead character fails.
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