1. Posted: February 14, 2020In:

    A broken woman tries to find her way by deciding whether to pursue her own path or go down the path her lover had begged her to.

    Richiev Singularity

    What is her own path? What is the path her lover wants her to go down? Unless the logline reader can visualize it, it won't hook them.

    What is her own path?

    What is the path her lover wants her to go down?

    Unless the logline reader can visualize it, it won’t hook them.

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  2. Posted: February 14, 2020In:

    A woman and a man meet and fall in love in their dreams. They are a part of an experimental program that’s getting canceled. They must find a way to meet in person before their connection is gone, if it was ever real.?

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    Richiev Singularity

    I'll give this a try, how about something like this --------------------------------------------------------- "When she falls for the man of her dreams, a woman who was part of an experimental sleep therapy is determined to search for her nocturnal lover in spite the facility is now closed and all tRead more

    I’ll give this a try, how about something like this

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    “When she falls for the man of her dreams, a woman who was part of an experimental sleep therapy is determined to search for her nocturnal lover in spite the facility is now closed and all the records are lost.”

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  3. Posted: February 12, 2020In:

    After a student accidentally dies and she gets the blame, a burned-out teacher goes on the run, but when news spreads and kids? behaviour and test results improve nationwide, teachers unite and she must lead them in a revolution to bring fear and respect back to the classroom.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think this would work better if the teacher Spanked the student instead of murdering them.

    I think this would work better if the teacher Spanked the student instead of murdering them.

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