1. Posted: November 15, 2019In:

    Waking up in a mansion filled with vampires, two detectives must work their way through four floors to save a missing girl ? and get out alive.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think this tells it all. I understand the story and the goal of the two leads and the monster in the house scenario. If you make any changes to this logline, make sure they are small  

    I think this tells it all. I understand the story and the goal of the two leads and the monster in the house scenario.

    If you make any changes to this logline, make sure they are small

     

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  2. Posted: November 16, 2019In:

    “When an aspiring young architect loses his mother to cancer and his world is turned upside down, he discovers unlikely inspiration in the pages of a drug addict’s journal while on a dual mission to obtain his dream job and find a higher meaning to his personal tragedy.”

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    Richiev Singularity

    This is the kind of story I like and enjoy However, when it comes to the logline, I am not exactly sure what sets the story in motion, is it the death of his mother or finding the journal. Anyway, good luck with this,

    This is the kind of story I like and enjoy

    However, when it comes to the logline, I am not exactly sure what sets the story in motion, is it the death of his mother or finding the journal.

    Anyway, good luck with this,

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  3. Posted: November 14, 2019In:

    When two incompetent crews try to rob her bank at the same time, an ambitious bank manager must play one against the other to buy time and save the money.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When two crews rob the same bank, the beleaguered bank manager plays one crew against the other in order to save the customers."

    “When two crews rob the same bank, the beleaguered bank manager plays one crew against the other in order to save the customers.”

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