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  1. Posted: November 25, 2019In: Crime

    When she discovers her former lover been assassinated, and her son would be dumped in the river for his father?s sins. a ex convict must free herself from prison and risk her own life to save and take down the Harlem crime mob and their boss responsible for her son?s kidnapped.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 25, 2019 at 6:12 pm

    "When a hit is placed on her son, a criminal mastermind must escape from prison and take down the vindictive mob boss responsible in order to save her child"

    “When a hit is placed on her son, a criminal mastermind must escape from prison and take down the vindictive mob boss responsible in order to save her child”

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2019In: Drama

    A crush kindled comedienne and?a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 25, 2019 at 10:19 am

    You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one. 1: Not sure what is a "crush kindled comedienne" 2: connection delusional fan... do you mean a stalker? 3: "a viral coma recovery," again I don't know what this means In other words, after reading this logline, I still don't know what the storyRead more

    You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one.

    1: Not sure what is a “crush kindled comedienne”

    2: connection delusional fan… do you mean a stalker?

    3: “a viral coma recovery,” again I don’t know what this means

    In other words, after reading this logline, I still don’t know what the story is about

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  3. Posted: November 22, 2019In: Horror

    Chained together by backwoods cannibals, a bank robber and his hostage escape and must survive in unknown terrain – while the hostage is desperate to save her daughter, who they left with their captors.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 23, 2019 at 1:42 am

    I think this logline would work better if it was presented from the point of view of the hostage. Her daughter is in the hands of backwoods cannibals, and she is chained to a bank robber who wants to escape, and she must find a way to save her daughter. So I think the story concept is solid, but theRead more

    I think this logline would work better if it was presented from the point of view of the hostage. Her daughter is in the hands of backwoods cannibals, and she is chained to a bank robber who wants to escape, and she must find a way to save her daughter.

    So I think the story concept is solid, but the most intriguing part is the plight of the mother/hostage and the logline would be more compelling if told from her point of view.

     

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