1. Posted: November 25, 2019In:

    When bank robbers and their hostages run into backwoods cannibals, the bank robber is chained to the hostage, and when they escape, must work together whilst being hunted through unknown terrain.

    Richiev Singularity

    While I would have gone the other way with this one,? (Concentrated on the hostage's plight to save her daughter) I do think you were correct to stick to one main plot.(btw, the 'one bullet' plot point seems to be a hook, you might want to add that to the logline and try it on for size, you can alwaRead more

    While I would have gone the other way with this one,? (Concentrated on the hostage’s plight to save her daughter) I do think you were correct to stick to one main plot.

    (btw, the ‘one bullet’ plot point seems to be a hook, you might want to add that to the logline and try it on for size, you can always take it back out if you don’t like it)

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2019In:

    Trapped inside his house with a malevolent ghost, a father must protect his family, whilst the ghost, who turns out to be an old foe, sets out to play each family member off each other.

    Richiev Singularity

    I like the idea "Trapped inside his house by the malevolent ghost of a rival, an (Adjective) father must save his family from the deceptive spirits evil plot to turn each family member against each other."

    I like the idea

    “Trapped inside his house by the malevolent ghost of a rival, an (Adjective) father must save his family from the deceptive spirits evil plot to turn each family member against each other.”

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  3. Posted: November 25, 2019In:

    When she discovers her former lover been assassinated, and her son would be dumped in the river for his father?s sins. a ex convict must free herself from prison and risk her own life to save and take down the Harlem crime mob and their boss responsible for her son?s kidnapped.

    Richiev Singularity

    Possible title: Even Worse (Because the mob boss who kidnapped her son is bad, but the mom is 'even worse'... sort of a female version of Payback)

    Possible title: Even Worse

    (Because the mob boss who kidnapped her son is bad, but the mom is ‘even worse’… sort of a female version of Payback)

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