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  1. Posted: September 27, 2019In: SciFi

    A na?ve teenager takes a job as an interstellar mailman, to move to a paradise planet. On the job, he gets chased by foreign agents and assassins and discovers his paradise isn’t as good as it sounds

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 27, 2019 at 8:27 am

    There are a lot of interesting things in the logline, but I am not sure how it all connects. How does becoming an interstellar (Travelling from planet to planet) mailman (Mail carrier) and moving to a paradise relate? Also, I don't see how assassins and foreign agents connect to any of this? Why wouRead more

    There are a lot of interesting things in the logline, but I am not sure how it all connects.

    How does becoming an interstellar (Travelling from planet to planet) mailman (Mail carrier) and moving to a paradise relate?

    Also, I don’t see how assassins and foreign agents connect to any of this? Why would they be interested in a simple mail carrier?

    Now if the logline was framed something like this:

    “When he’s given a mysterious package to deliver, with the promise of citizenship to a paradise planet, an interstellar Mail carrier must outsmart foreign agents an assassins if he is to achieve his dream of living in Utopia”

    If this were the logine then we could see how being a mail carrier, achieving his dream of living on a paradise planet and assassins all connect.

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  2. Posted: September 19, 2019In: SciFi

    Factory farmers are given permission to murder humans too, while those alive and still refusing to use animals are imprisoned, including four youngsters who barely survived a family of agriculturists and their own parents.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 20, 2019 at 8:42 pm

    Who is the lead character What do they want What is standing in their way

    Who is the lead character

    What do they want

    What is standing in their way

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2019In: Horror

    After starting a commune in the aftermath of Woodstock, a group of hippies has to resort to stealing from a hermit chicken farmer. All goes well until they kill his favorite hen… Now it?s his time to kill.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 20, 2019 at 8:40 pm

    Agreed, who is the lead character? "After they kill his favorite chicken, a hermit farmer seeks revenge on the hippies who kill his favorite pet."

    Agreed, who is the lead character?

    “After they kill his favorite chicken, a hermit farmer seeks revenge on the hippies who kill his favorite pet.”

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