1. Posted: October 3, 2019In:

    (3rd revision) When a vigilante hacker maliciously deploys a power-hungry biotech corporation?s untested experimental software and discovers it capable of manipulating reality to their advantage, she must exploit the resulting bugs, to stop them, before the world is at their mercy.

    Richiev Singularity

    Who is the antagonist, the Malicious hacker or the biotech corporation?In other words, is your lead character trying to stop the Hacker or trying to stop the company?

    Who is the antagonist, the Malicious hacker or the biotech corporation?

    In other words, is your lead character trying to stop the Hacker or trying to stop the company?

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  2. Posted: October 1, 2019In:

    When a bullied classmate turns up drowned, meek hall monitor must team up with their high school tormentor in order to catch the culprit.

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    Richiev Singularity

    I get the story, however, I think it could be told a little better-----------------------------------------------------------------------------"When his best friend is murdered, a meek hall monitor must team with the school bully, who's the police's chief suspect, in order to find the real killer."

    I get the story, however, I think it could be told a little better

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    “When his best friend is murdered, a meek hall monitor must team with the school bully, who’s the police’s chief suspect, in order to find the real killer.”

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  3. Posted: October 1, 2019In:

    An ambitious blogger lands a legit writing gig with a large publishing firm the only problem is her first story , the subject is a wealthy philanthropist with a surprising secret. ?His associates grow nervous about the nosy news lady uncovering potentially damaging information regarding financial improprieties. With a deadline closing in she discovers there is a bounty on her head.

    Richiev Singularity

    I am going to try to get to the core of what you wrote:---------------------------------------------------------------"When an ambitious blogger is hired to investigate a reclusive billionaire, she finds his staff are as determined to protect their bosses secrets, as she is to get the story"?

    I am going to try to get to the core of what you wrote:

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    “When an ambitious blogger is hired to investigate a reclusive billionaire, she finds his staff are as determined to protect their bosses secrets, as she is to get the story”?

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