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A young girl taken to an alternative world to be the starchild to save the world by putting on a ring called the starring given by God
I think you should begin with the threat. You say the lead character must save the world, but from what... As in "When (This threat) arises to destroy the world a...
I think you should begin with the threat. You say the lead character must save the world, but from what…
As in “When (This threat) arises to destroy the world a…
See lessWhen his wife leaves him and his world falls apart, a depressed control-freak attempts to tie up all the loose ends in his life and with those he cares about as he plans his own suicide
Possible Title: It's a miserable life
Possible Title: It’s a miserable life
See less(4th revision) 3000 BC: a hybrid child, despised by the world, is adopted by a genie; causing his stepfater’s damnation, he must redeem himself and become the god of the dead, Anubis.
Scott, I was reading previous versions, and I believe the hybrid is that of, half-wolf, half-human. But it isn't explained well in this version.Also, not sure how the main character being adopted leads to his stepfather's damnation, the correlation between the two events isn't easy to see and also nRead more
Scott, I was reading previous versions, and I believe the hybrid is that of, half-wolf, half-human. But it isn’t explained well in this version.
Also, not sure how the main character being adopted leads to his stepfather’s damnation, the correlation between the two events isn’t easy to see and also not explained.
But I do think the story is interesting. And I think if the logline were as interesting as the story, it would definitely help sell this.
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