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When she allows her husband’s overdose, a neglectful young mother must embark on a journey of recovery or risk losing her children to the system forever.
I think the idea is solid but the opening line needs to be changed because people are responsible for their own sobriety, so I don't understand how she could 'allow' her husband to overdose. "When her husband's overdose wakes her up, an addicted mother enters rehab determined that her children won'tRead more
I think the idea is solid but the opening line needs to be changed because people are responsible for their own sobriety, so I don’t understand how she could ‘allow’ her husband to overdose.
“When her husband’s overdose wakes her up, an addicted mother enters rehab determined that her children won’t lose their mom as well”
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"When he accidentally exposes a powerful Grammy winner as a plagiarist on live TV an ambitious rising star athlete must..." (Then tell us what they must do)
“When he accidentally exposes a powerful Grammy winner as a plagiarist on live TV an ambitious rising star athlete must…” (Then tell us what they must do)
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From this logline, I am not sure what makes your lead character a protagonist. He stumbles into a deathmatch. That is, he didn't do it pro-actively His goal is just, to survive, again that isn't really a pro-active goal And the one thing he does is team up with a veteran hitman, (Someone who does haRead more
From this logline, I am not sure what makes your lead character a protagonist.
He stumbles into a deathmatch. That is, he didn’t do it pro-actively
His goal is just, to survive, again that isn’t really a pro-active goal
And the one thing he does is team up with a veteran hitman, (Someone who does have skill) which means he is relying on someone else to save him.
In other words, as your logline reads, things happen to the lead character but the lead character doesn’t seem to do anything other than try no to die, there doesn’t seem to be any plan of action or pro-active goal.
In other words, what makes your lead character a Pro-tagonist.
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