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A CSIS agent returns to duty to stop an eco-terrorist leader who’s missing his original face, and his followers who are in possession of the American government’s plans for the next 81 years.
There the problem of suspension of disbelief that goes along with any story. In the case of your story, the reader has to suspend their disbelief that the US government is competent enough to carry out an 81-year plan.
There the problem of suspension of disbelief that goes along with any story.
In the case of your story, the reader has to suspend their disbelief that the US government is competent enough to carry out an 81-year plan.
See lessWhen Josh receives a mysterious phone call from the hospital by his estranged son, he must decide whether to sign a medical agreement that will alter his child?s life forever.
Everything you have written could take place in five minutes.A guy receives a phone call, goes to the hospital, he's told he must sign a paper, He either decides to sign or not to sign, then the story is over.The reason I point this out, because it's difficult to visualize a story from the logline tRead more
Everything you have written could take place in five minutes.
A guy receives a phone call, goes to the hospital, he’s told he must sign a paper, He either decides to sign or not to sign, then the story is over.
The reason I point this out, because it’s difficult to visualize a story from the logline that you have written.
In other words, I don’t think the logline conveys to the reader the story that you wrote or if it isn’t written, the story that you visualize in your head.
See lessA young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.
Does the lead character, by chance, have a goal?
Does the lead character, by chance, have a goal?
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