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When a Commander of the largest military force in the universe, telepathically thwarts an assassination attempt by an obstinately powerful female warrior. He tricks her into facing and ultimately destroying her evil mirror double. A double that’s the source of her own power.
I have to agree with the others, The logline is written as if the Commander is the lead character, but the Warrior seems more sympathetic.
I have to agree with the others, The logline is written as if the Commander is the lead character, but the Warrior seems more sympathetic.
See lessWhen a self-made CEO develops a romantic connection with an ageing musician she must confront the loss of her company and her own mortality to rediscover love that transcends all.
What is the main plot of the story, Is it the lead falling in love with the musician? Or is it about the loss of her company and what the lead must do because of it? In other words, which is the A plotline, and which is the B plotline? Because right now the two halves of the logline seem a bit disjoRead more
What is the main plot of the story,
Is it the lead falling in love with the musician?
Or is it about the loss of her company and what the lead must do because of it?
In other words, which is the A plotline, and which is the B plotline?
Because right now the two halves of the logline seem a bit disjointed
See lessWhen she starts being tormented by an evil force,? a business woman must seek help from her husband after he is committed to a psychiatric hospital for trying to open her third eye.
"When she's tormented by an evil entity, a businesswoman must help her psychic husband escape from a mental institution so the two of them can discover a way to banish the malevolent being."
“When she’s tormented by an evil entity, a businesswoman must help her psychic husband escape from a mental institution so the two of them can discover a way to banish the malevolent being.”
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