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A whiskey soused private detective is hired to retrieve a businessman’s errant daughter and must convincingly infiltrate the clean living cult the daughter has joined.
I like this premise, (In a story twist, maybe the Private Detective becomes a better person because of the cult lol)
I like this premise,
(In a story twist, maybe the Private Detective becomes a better person because of the cult lol)
See lessThree ruthless employees of an eccentric childless billionaire suffering from Alzheimer’s attempt to trick him into bequeathing his vast fortune to them by posing as his children.
"When their eccentric boss is diagnosed with Alzheimer's, a ruthless limo driver competes with the cook and butler to convince their childless Billionaire boss that they are his children."----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Read more
“When their eccentric boss is diagnosed with Alzheimer’s, a ruthless limo driver competes with the cook and butler to convince their childless Billionaire boss that they are his children.”
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btw there are two main obstacles for this logline
The first: Why would the audience root for people who are ruthlessly trying to trick someone with Alzheimer’s (This comes across as very mean)
The Second: A person diagnosed with Alzheimer’s would not legally be able to change their will.
That being said, this is an interesting premise and definitely doable, but you will have to overcome those two obstacles. (1: Make one of the lead characters sympathetic to the audience somehow. 2: Overcome the legal obstacle in a way the audience will believe)
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Your logline has a lead character, goal, conflict and a hook as well. I wouldn't change very much about this logline. (Think of it as minor tweeking if you decide to change something)
Your logline has a lead character, goal, conflict and a hook as well. I wouldn’t change very much about this logline. (Think of it as minor tweeking if you decide to change something)
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