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The diagnosis of infertility forces a desperate woman to decide whether she should face the risks of achieving her dream of motherhood at any cost.
What is the hook of your story. Being diagnosed as infertile is not that uncommon, many couples go through it.What sets your story apart.An example would be Raising Arizona, where a couple see on TV a family had Quintuplets, The couple decide, since they don't have a baby and the people on TV have sRead more
What is the hook of your story. Being diagnosed as infertile is not that uncommon, many couples go through it.
What sets your story apart.
An example would be Raising Arizona, where a couple see on TV a family had Quintuplets, The couple decide, since they don’t have a baby and the people on TV have so many babies, they would take one. This made for a great hook to that story.
Anyway, this is just me saying the hook (Whatever it is) should be added to the logline.
See lessA young, shallow and cellphone addicted woman awakens in a parallel universe where the internet was not invented in 1983 and must find a way to survive without Facebook, Twitter and Instagram.
This logline is a little confusing, I would take out '1983' because as written it reads as if the story takes place in 1983. However after reading this a couple times I don't think that is when the story takes place.
This logline is a little confusing, I would take out ‘1983’ because as written it reads as if the story takes place in 1983.
However after reading this a couple times I don’t think that is when the story takes place.
See lessAn Uber driver in anger management therapy takes an egotistical and remorseless hedge fund manager hostage in her vehicle after discovering he was the reason she lost everything in the 2008 financial crash.
What is the Uber Driver's goal? (Because without a goal you have only created a situation not a story)
What is the Uber Driver’s goal? (Because without a goal you have only created a situation not a story)
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