1. Posted: August 22, 2019In:

    1950, blackmail and threats of outing a closeted gay detective when he is tasked with ?investigating the murder of his lover that appear to have been committed during a gay encounter.

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    "When his lover is murdered, detective in 1950's (Chicago?) risks outing himself in order to discover the person who killed his forbidden partner."

    “When his lover is murdered, detective in 1950’s (Chicago?) risks outing himself in order to discover the person who killed his forbidden partner.”

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  2. Posted: August 20, 2019In:

    A young man wakes up in an alternate 2016 where the United Kingdom voted to remain in the European Union.

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    Story: Lead character, inciting incident, Goal, Something or someone opposing that goal... If you just have a character and inciting incident, then you only have a situation. As a result, (I assume) your story has the other two elements, so I would add the Goal and What's opposing the goal to the loRead more

    Story: Lead character, inciting incident, Goal, Something or someone opposing that goal…

    If you just have a character and inciting incident, then you only have a situation.

    As a result, (I assume) your story has the other two elements, so I would add the Goal and What’s opposing the goal to the logline in order to make the logline more compelling.

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  3. Posted: August 21, 2019In:

    In the future where people can change gender in an instant thanks to a revolutionary new pill, a young woman uses this method to evade capture by the authorities in pursuit of the real person who murdered her daughter.

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    Interesting

    Interesting

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