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After discovering her utopian town is the result of a government experiment, a tenacious teenage girl must reverse the symbiosis before it becomes permanent, or risk a fate worse than repressive governmental overreach: being just like everyone else.
The term "Reverse the symbiosis" is a bit clunky. (Also, in a symbiotic relationship both parties benefit; it's a good thing)Perhaps it is more of a parasitic relationship where the government is using the towns people in someone way, draining their life away (Perhaps metaphorically; perhaps literalRead more
The term “Reverse the symbiosis” is a bit clunky. (Also, in a symbiotic relationship both parties benefit; it’s a good thing)
Perhaps it is more of a parasitic relationship where the government is using the towns people in someone way, draining their life away (Perhaps metaphorically; perhaps literally)
That being said, It think the concept is solid, a throwback to 60’s sci-fi horror where an outside force (Usually aliens) turn the towns fold into some sort of pod people. So a modern take on that premise where it’s the government instead of aliens.
See lessIn the midst of the swinging sixties, a racist, yet charismatic con man inexplicably befriends a black jewel thief and decides to steal a four million dollar painting from a heavily guarded and elaborate art museum.
Stories like these are usually more compelling if the lead character is forced to do something he or she doesn't want to do, which will add to the conflict. So in your story, if the con man is forced (By someone powerful or someone the lead owes money too) to work with the African American jewel thiRead more
Stories like these are usually more compelling if the lead character is forced to do something he or she doesn’t want to do, which will add to the conflict.
So in your story, if the con man is forced (By someone powerful or someone the lead owes money too) to work with the African American jewel thief. then you have conflict which will be very entertaining.
See lessA Google assistant narrates the story of a dysfunctional family going through a messy divorce after the father?committed infidelity.
You have told us who the narrator is, but who is the lead character?
You have told us who the narrator is, but who is the lead character?
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