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When he?s a contestant on Blind Date, a hopeless romantic bucks the trend and asks the important questions to find out who is really behind each door
I like your description of what you want from your story, I didn't get all that from the logline. So from a story perspective, I do think this works. However,Just curious, but what is the main conflict of the story?
I like your description of what you want from your story, I didn’t get all that from the logline. So from a story perspective, I do think this works. However,
Just curious, but what is the main conflict of the story?
See lessA wallflower decides to come off the wall and make the world her stage.
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict. What you have written is more of a blurb... "In space, no one can hear you scream" Two completely different things. A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching yourRead more
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict.
What you have written is more of a blurb… “In space, no one can hear you scream”
Two completely different things.
A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching your movie. (After the movie is made and about to come to theaters)
A logline is used to sell your script. (Before your script has even been seen by a studio)
However, I would definitely keep some of this in the logline.
When (This thing happens to the lead character) a wallflower is forced to come off the wall if she’s too (Accomplish this goal)
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Does the lead character have a goal? And if so, what is standing in the way of the goal? (I only ask because in the logline (As written) events are happening to the lead character instead of the lead character taking action, but that could simply be a logline issue)
Does the lead character have a goal? And if so, what is standing in the way of the goal? (I only ask because in the logline (As written) events are happening to the lead character instead of the lead character taking action, but that could simply be a logline issue)
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