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  1. Posted: June 5, 2019In: Fantasy

    In a cold country ruled by a hard-hearted king, three close rogues commit to a secret quest to find the girl from the prophecy so she could fulfill her destiny as the second Follower and help put an end to the dread of the emerging NightSouls.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 5, 2019 at 4:35 pm

    Btw is there a specific reason why there are three rogues instead of one? Just curious, it doesn't mean three rogues aren't the corrected number I was just wondering if there was an actual lead character.

    Btw is there a specific reason why there are three rogues instead of one?

    Just curious, it doesn’t mean three rogues aren’t the corrected number I was just wondering if there was an actual lead character.

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2019In: Fantasy

    In a cold country ruled by a hard-hearted king, three close rogues commit to a secret quest to find the girl from the prophecy so she could fulfill her destiny as the second Follower and help put an end to the dread of the emerging NightSouls.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 5, 2019 at 3:34 am

    Since this doesn't seem to be about taking down the king. I would drop the part about the "hard-hearted king" and replace it with what bad thing will happen if the NightSouls emerges.Something like this:When the land is threatened (With this bad thing) because of the emergence of the NIghtSouls, thrRead more

    Since this doesn’t seem to be about taking down the king. I would drop the part about the “hard-hearted king” and replace it with what bad thing will happen if the NightSouls emerges.

    Something like this:

    When the land is threatened (With this bad thing) because of the emergence of the NIghtSouls, three rogues go on a quest to find the girl from prophesy, in order to save the land.”

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2019In: Crime

    On the verge of taking his own life, a detective will have to get back on his feet to investigate the disappearance of his neglected daughter

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    Added an answer on June 4, 2019 at 4:21 am

    Your logline needs that; (One More Thing) but I don't know what that one more thing happens to be. Unless the movie is actually 2 hours of the detective getting back on his feet before he can start his investigation. Personally, I would throw a few more rocks at the detective, not only is he suicidaRead more

    Your logline needs that; (One More Thing) but I don’t know what that one more thing happens to be.

    Unless the movie is actually 2 hours of the detective getting back on his feet before he can start his investigation.

    Personally, I would throw a few more rocks at the detective, not only is he suicidal but he must also do, the last thing in the world he wants to do.

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    “When his daughter disappears, a suicidal detective must (Do this thing he really doesn’t want to do) in order to find her.”

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