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  1. Posted: June 2, 2019In: SciFi

    Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 3, 2019 at 10:36 am

    Who's the lead character? What do they want? What's standing in their way?

    Who’s the lead character?

    What do they want?

    What’s standing in their way?

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  2. Posted: June 2, 2019In: 01

    A married man sees his wife and young daughter suffer physical and mental afflictions in the wake of an ill-fated affair, as unseen forces appear determined to get the truth out.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 2, 2019 at 10:10 pm

    One more thing, you say... "A married man sees his wife and young daughter suffer..."This should lead to a goal. What is the lead character's goal? (And by "What is the lead character's goal" I mean it should be in the logline)

    One more thing, you say… “A married man sees his wife and young daughter suffer…”

    This should lead to a goal. What is the lead character’s goal? (And by “What is the lead character’s goal” I mean it should be in the logline)

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  3. Posted: June 2, 2019In: 01

    A married man sees his wife and young daughter suffer physical and mental afflictions in the wake of an ill-fated affair, as unseen forces appear determined to get the truth out.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 2, 2019 at 10:06 pm

    Who had the affair?"After his wife discovers his affair...""After he discovers his wife's affair..."

    Who had the affair?

    “After his wife discovers his affair…”

    “After he discovers his wife’s affair…”

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