1. Posted: June 10, 2019In:

    Peter’s test logline

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    Well, we? have a lead character; PeterAnd we have a goal; to test the loglineBut where is the conflict... :)

    Well, we? have a lead character; Peter

    And we have a goal; to test the logline

    But where is the conflict… 🙂

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  2. Posted: May 7, 2019In:

    When her prestigious legal firm goes under for corruption, a successful lawyer finds herself reliving her troubled childhood when she reluctantly accepts a job as legal aid family court lawyer.

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    I think the reader can understand the story from this logline. However, I do agree with kid_gokuu about the lead character being reactive. But the idea is solid. I would probably drop the part about reliving her troubled childhood unless of course, she worked as a legal aid family court lawyer whenRead more

    I think the reader can understand the story from this logline.

    However, I do agree with kid_gokuu about the lead character being reactive. But the idea is solid.

    I would probably drop the part about reliving her troubled childhood unless of course, she worked as a legal aid family court lawyer when she was a kid. (or at least show how her childhood and working as a legal aid family court lawyer connect)

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  3. Posted: June 10, 2019In:

    When a colossal monster attacks New York City, a partygoer and his friends must rescue his girlfriend in the middle of the chaos while documenting the events. ? Cloverfield (2008)

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    I agree with dpg, I think your logline works, however, I do wonder if you could add the part where they document the events.

    I agree with dpg, I think your logline works, however, I do wonder if you could add the part where they document the events.

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