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A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.
Is this script written? Or are you just fleshing out the idea before you begin writing the story? I only ask because if the story has not been written I would suggest that as a story point: the princess hates werewolves. In other words, she believes that werewolves are responsible for the attack onRead more
Is this script written?
Or are you just fleshing out the idea before you begin writing the story?
I only ask because if the story has not been written I would suggest that as a story point: the princess hates werewolves.
In other words, she believes that werewolves are responsible for the attack on her village but the lead character knows it’s the evil knight.
At first, she captures the lead character and doesn’t believe he is innocent she believes he attacked her village, but after a while, they reluctantly team up in order to take down the actual bad guy who attacked both villages.
See lessA lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.
This version is better than the first version by far. Also, mikepedley85's suggestion is solid.
This version is better than the first version by far.
Also, mikepedley85’s suggestion is solid.
See lessIn a time of great tension between fantastical creature and men, a werewolf warrior, trying to follow in his ancestors’ footsteps, reluctantly teams up with a human princess to track down the mysterious knight who slaughtered the warrior’s village when he was a child.
Why now? If the slaughter happened when the werewolf was a child, why is he getting his revenge at this particular moment? Why not go after the mysterious knight last year? Why not go after the mysterious knight next year? What happened that causes the lead character to take action and get justice rRead more
Why now?
If the slaughter happened when the werewolf was a child, why is he getting his revenge at this particular moment? Why not go after the mysterious knight last year? Why not go after the mysterious knight next year?
What happened that causes the lead character to take action and get justice right now?
Also, you can drop the part about, “trying to follow in his ancestors’ footsteps” because it distracts the reader with a second goal. The main goal seems to be to get justice for his slaughtered village. So you don’t need the second goal of following in his ancestor’s footsteps.
anyway, this sounds like an interesting story, good luck with this.
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