1. Posted: June 21, 2019In:

    Rumours of the special school closure looming, fifteen year old student Toni must? decide and risk everything she knows and believes to feel she finally belongs in her world.

    Richiev Singularity

    Okay, this probably isn't quite right, but here is a go based on what you said your story was about. It might still need some changes though, so it is more of an example than a finished logline-----------------------------------------------------------"When her special education institution closes,Read more

    Okay, this probably isn’t quite right, but here is a go based on what you said your story was about. It might still need some changes though, so it is more of an example than a finished logline

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    “When her special education institution closes, a student with cerebral palsy fights against her parents and teachers, to be admitted to public school in order to have a normal senior year.”

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  2. Posted: June 21, 2019In:

    Rumours of the special school closure looming, fifteen year old student Toni must? decide and risk everything she knows and believes to feel she finally belongs in her world.

    Richiev Singularity

    What exactly is the lead character's goal? Is there a 'bad guy'? Is the closure just a 'rumor' or is the school going to close unless the lead does something?

    What exactly is the lead character’s goal?

    Is there a ‘bad guy’?

    Is the closure just a ‘rumor’ or is the school going to close unless the lead does something?

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  3. Posted: June 17, 2019In:

    When a troubled hospice nurse accepts a new job caring for a mysterious couple?s granddaughter on their rural plantation, she must protect her young patient from a violent attacker bent on revenge.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think all the elements are there, and I can picture the story in my head.I do wonder what the attacker wants revenge for, what did the granddaughter to do the attacker?

    I think all the elements are there, and I can picture the story in my head.

    I do wonder what the attacker wants revenge for, what did the granddaughter to do the attacker?

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