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Billions of refugees seek shelter from deadly weather events, antibiotics have lost their potency, nations wage wars over land and water, and activists not opposed to violence towards humans try to save animals from extinction.
Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way?
Who is the lead character?
What is their goal?
What is standing in their way?
See lessWhen his son is taken by a monster into another dimension, a withdrawn divorcee must venture through the portal to bring him back.
A lot of the important details are in your logline, inciting incident, lead character, and goal. My question would be, how quickly does the lead character go into the portal, is it on page ten of the script (I have no idea if this is written yet) or is the lead entering the portal the midpoint turn?Read more
A lot of the important details are in your logline, inciting incident, lead character, and goal.
My question would be, how quickly does the lead character go into the portal, is it on page ten of the script (I have no idea if this is written yet) or is the lead entering the portal the midpoint turn?
I only ask, because if the lead enters the other dimension early enough in the story, you might want to add a brief, (One or two words) description of what the world is like on the other side, Is it a dark fairytale world? Is it like Hell? Is it a world created out of old sneakers? Adding this quick detail mighty infuse a little spice to your logline.
See lessWhen a starry-eyed wallflower lands the coveted role in a theatre production of the Heroines of Greek Tragedy, she must step out of the chorus line and out of her shell and into the spotlight.
Your idea seems like it could be fun, perhaps the lead character is the costume manager, she is too shy to get on stage but secretly wants to be a star.She knows all the lines by heart. So when the lead can't perform she is the only one who can step in at this late a moment and save the day.?PerhapsRead more
Your idea seems like it could be fun, perhaps the lead character is the costume manager, she is too shy to get on stage but secretly wants to be a star.
She knows all the lines by heart. So when the lead can’t perform she is the only one who can step in at this late a moment and save the day.
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Perhaps the lead even breaks her leg 5 minutes before the show must go on lol, now no one knows what to do.
That’s when her friend says, “What about Emily, she knows all the lines”
Next thing she knows she is being put into costume and shoved out onto the stage.
It’s her moment, what will she do? will she whither under the heat of the white-hot spotlight or will she shine?
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