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Posted: April 14, 2019In: Drama

Upon realising he has a super-fan, the emotionally volatile singer of a struggling band initially feels flattered; but he allows this feeling to darken into something obsessive and unhealthy as he and the fan begin an illicit dance of mutual shadowing, pursuing each other without ever actually meeting. So when the fan’s interest begins to wane, her happiness and the wellbeing of those around her is threatened by his unwillingness to give up her adoration.

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Added an answer on April 15, 2019 at 2:49 am

I like the twist, It's a good hook, but the logline needs to be broken down into the stories core element

I like the twist, It’s a good hook, but the logline needs to be broken down into the stories core element

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Posted: April 13, 2019In: Crime

In 1977, a reformed ex-con must return to New York City?s violent underworld in order to save his childhood best friend from a dangerous gangster.

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Added an answer on April 13, 2019 at 8:03 am

I think this is the best of the loglines that you posted. I understand who's the lead character, I understand the lead character's motivation, and I get a feel for what the danger would be. My only critique would be that it needs a hook. I have seen movies where a former gangster is pulled back intoRead more

I think this is the best of the loglines that you posted. I understand who’s the lead character, I understand the lead character’s motivation, and I get a feel for what the danger would be.

My only critique would be that it needs a hook.

I have seen movies where a former gangster is pulled back into his former life in order to help someone he cares about.

Carlito’s Way would be a good example of it done right.
What element in your story separates it from other movies of this type?

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