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Destiny brings a lonely sketch artist and a bohemian girl together. Despite fate granting them one night, they are forever bound by a magical origami legend.
Is the story about the 'one night'? Or does the 'one night,' set the story in motion?
Is the story about the ‘one night’?
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When a terrifying drug lord requires surgery after an assassination attempt, an infiltration specialist must terminate him, posing as a surgeon inside his fortified mansion, before he brings Venezuela into civil war.
I think the story should be more personal or at least have more stakes. What bad thing will happen if the black ops soldier fails? --------------------------------- "When his target survives the assassination attempt, a hitman is given one last chance to finish the job by infiltrating his victims coRead more
I think the story should be more personal or at least have more stakes. What bad thing will happen if the black ops soldier fails?
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“When his target survives the assassination attempt, a hitman is given one last chance to finish the job by infiltrating his victims compound posing as a surgeon, but if he fails, those who hired him promise that he will become the next target.”
Having spent their first fifteen years in an abusive home in Michigan, twins Jacob and Jenee discover that they were born in a different dimension. As they reunite with their birth family and rediscover their birthplace Pontint. Jacob and Jennee learn that they are the future of Pontint, and had been hidden away to protect them from the royal family who wants them killed.
While this logline still has problems, I get a better sense of what the story is about. The main problem this time is that your logline is all set-up and no forward story. ----- "When they discover they're heirs to an otherworldly kingdom, a brother and sister must..." (Then tell us what they must dRead more
While this logline still has problems, I get a better sense of what the story is about.
The main problem this time is that your logline is all set-up and no forward story.
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“When they discover they’re heirs to an otherworldly kingdom, a brother and sister must…” (Then tell us what they must do)