1. Posted: April 22, 2019In:

    When her adopted brother threatens a hostile takeover of the family business, a resentful cyborg must come out of hiding to stop him.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think you might need an extra word or two to make this one work. For instance, if you were to say, a cyborg lawyer must come out of hiding, then we would know that the story would revolve around a legal battle. If you were to say, a cyborg assassin must come out of hiding, then we would know the sRead more

    I think you might need an extra word or two to make this one work.

    For instance, if you were to say, a cyborg lawyer must come out of hiding, then we would know that the story would revolve around a legal battle.
    If you were to say, a cyborg assassin must come out of hiding, then we would know the story would be about the lead trying to kill adopted brother.

    Adding something like this would help clarify in the readers mind what the plot would be.

    Also, what business? Is it a factory? Is it a cyborg mail-order bride business? Is the family business in the ‘red light’ district where for 50 credits cyborgs can get a lube job?

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  2. Posted: April 19, 2019In:

    A former sex addict, unable to have sex with the woman he loves, returns to his old psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman, and the only person who might be able to cure him.

    Richiev Singularity

    If he is a former sex addict, why does he need to be cured?

    If he is a former sex addict, why does he need to be cured?

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  3. Posted: April 19, 2019In:

    A young orphaned girl from a Forest tribe is magically transported to a medieval futuristic realm populated with talking Animals and Mythological creatures. She must confront her long lost father, the Vicious king in order to restore peace in the realm and bring him back home.

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    Richiev Singularity

    "...a medieval futuristic realm?" :)

    “…a medieval futuristic realm?” 🙂

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