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  1. Posted: March 21, 2019In: Family

    When a city council decides to impound all stray animals, a selfish ex-house cat seeks refuge with a family of street cats, but to earn his place, he must learn to put others first and outsmart the Feline Mafia henchman that stands between the street cats and the new home that will save them all.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 21, 2019 at 4:11 pm

    Wouldn't the Mafia be dogs?

    Wouldn’t the Mafia be dogs?

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  2. Posted: March 20, 2019In: Family

    After naively inviting her daughter’s various ‘godfathers’, a mafia overlord must prevent her wedding from becoming a gang war

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 21, 2019 at 4:07 pm

    I agree with Wayne, great premiseHowever, I don't understand how a mafia overlord would be so naive about mob politics; that he would invite a bunch of feuding rivals to his daughter's wedding.

    I agree with Wayne, great premise

    However, I don’t understand how a mafia overlord would be so naive about mob politics; that he would invite a bunch of feuding rivals to his daughter’s wedding.

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  3. Posted: March 20, 2019In: Adventure

    In Nebraska during the Dust Bowl era, a straight-laced bastard descendant of Jesse James has to travel to Devils Nest to help save the tribe of his half uncle, but shit goes south when the closing of a dam and a one-eyed Kansas City gangster threaten to sink his grandfather’s buried gold for good.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 20, 2019 at 12:54 pm

    It seems from your logline that the goal of the lead character is to get Jesse Jame's buried treasure. As a result, I wouldn't bury it at the end of the logline. If this is true, then what sets the story in motion is when something bad happens to his uncle's tribe. This causes the lead character toRead more

    It seems from your logline that the goal of the lead character is to get Jesse Jame’s buried treasure.
    As a result, I wouldn’t bury it at the end of the logline.

    If this is true, then what sets the story in motion is when something bad happens to his uncle’s tribe.
    This causes the lead character to go after the hidden gold in order to save the tribe.
    This event is missing from the logline.

    What bad thing happens to the tribe that causes the lead to go after the gold?
    Adding this event at the beginning of your logline will help it improve.

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