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The story of the radical writer John Reed, eye-witness to the Russian revolution, the only American to be buried in the Kremlin.
As for the logline, I think it needs to be tweaked just a little bit. When I first read it, I thought you mean he was buried "IN the wall" Sort of like how mobsters will bury an enemy at a construction site in concrete.
As for the logline, I think it needs to be tweaked just a little bit. When I first read it, I thought you mean he was buried “IN the wall” Sort of like how mobsters will bury an enemy at a construction site in concrete.
See less“When he discovers his multi-million dollar trust fund is locked away behind legal red tape, a broke Nigerian Prince uses the internet in order to convince highly pessimistic Americans to help him raise the money, so his funds will be released.”—- (Practice Logline)—- Title: Trust me (Maybe-Go fund me)
Take two: ------------"When he discovers his multi-million dollar trust fund is locked behind legal red tape, a spoiled Nigerian Prince has 30 days to convince highly pessimistic Americans to help him raise the legal fees, or lose the money forever."
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“When he discovers his multi-million dollar trust fund is locked behind legal red tape, a spoiled Nigerian Prince has 30 days to convince highly pessimistic Americans to help him raise the legal fees, or lose the money forever.”
When he falls in love with an alcoholic cop in rehab, a drug addicted mobster must keep his new love from discovering his mafia heritage in order to run away with her and escape his toxic family.
I think this is the best version of the logline so far.
I think this is the best version of the logline so far.
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