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A happy house wife is kidnapped when she finds her husband, a reformed crime lord, back in the act of committing dark evil crimes, leaving him to decide whether or not to save her and how it will affect his empire and himself if he does.
Protagonists are pro-active. If they are kidnapped then they are forced to solve their own problem. In your story, things happen to the lead character and someone else decides her fate. Either the story should be changed so that the protagonist solves her own problem (And determines her own fate) OrRead more
Protagonists are pro-active. If they are kidnapped then they are forced to solve their own problem.
See lessIn your story, things happen to the lead character and someone else decides her fate.
Either the story should be changed so that the protagonist solves her own problem (And determines her own fate)
Or the lead character should be changed to the crime lord. (Who is the one making all the decisions)
A young impressionable man is called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom until he finds out how the previous ruler died and investigates everyone, thinking how he might be next and what it would mean for the kingdom if he dies.
I agree with gmffr. The goal would be the lead character trying to avoid?being the next casualty, not him, thinking about how his death might affect everyone.
I agree with gmffr. The goal would be the lead character trying to avoid?being the next casualty, not him, thinking about how his death might affect everyone.
See lessIn order to register their young daughter in a private school, a self-entitled couple decides to rob a bank, but things take a turn when the robbery goes wrong and they are forced to run.
Why are we rooting for the main characters to succeed?
Why are we rooting for the main characters to succeed?
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