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The coming-of-age stories of a swashbuckling pirate, a rebellious princess, and an adventuring cuisinier.
Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way? (And what is a cuisinier?)
Who is the lead character?
What is their goal?
What is standing in their way?
(And what is a cuisinier?)
See lessA special unit must survive against civilians that have turned into flesh-eating demons on a moving train that was hit by a strange meteor and get to the engine room before it crashes.
1: I am going to combine this logline attempt with your previous one. (Your last logline had a lead character, an agent transporting a prisoner)2: I am going to give the lead character a tangible goal because?'fights against' is an action not a goalAnyway, I think your idea is a keeper. Hope my loglRead more
1: I am going to combine this logline attempt with your previous one. (Your last logline had a lead character, an agent transporting a prisoner)
2: I am going to give the lead character a tangible goal because?‘fights against’ is an action not a goal
Anyway, I think your idea is a keeper. Hope my logline attempt helps.
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“When the train’s passengers turn into flesh-eating demons, a federal officer and his prisoner must work together to help a ragtag group of survivors reach the train’s engine?in order to stop the train and escape.”
When an altruistic math geek finds her loved ones in financial hardship, she must use her newly-found ability of lottery prediction to turn their lives around risking her own as a mysterious criminal lottery boss wants her dead for ruining his superprofits.
I think there may be a slight story problem. If you hold a lottery and you sell 100 dollars worth of tickets, the prize will be 50 dollars. This is how the lottery makes money. When a person wins the lottery, it doesn't cut into the profits. The person who holds the lottery always makes a profit. InRead more
I think there may be a slight story problem.
If you hold a lottery and you sell 100 dollars worth of tickets, the prize will be 50 dollars. This is how the lottery makes money.
When a person wins the lottery, it doesn’t cut into the profits. The person who holds the lottery always makes a profit.
In other words, in a lottery, someone always wins. But the person who holds the lottery always makes money. They don’t actually lose money when there is a winner.
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