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A stubborn, US ex-soldier (28) is resurrected from hell to change humanity for the better, upon sacrificing his soul to hell.
One more thing, does being a "Stubborn, US army ex-military pilot" relate to the plot? Because you are using a lot of word space describing your character. That's okay if it is significant to the plot. But if it isn't you might want to cut it down.
One more thing, does being a “Stubborn, US army ex-military pilot” relate to the plot? Because you are using a lot of word space describing your character.
See lessThat’s okay if it is significant to the plot. But if it isn’t you might want to cut it down.
A stubborn, US ex-soldier (28) is resurrected from hell to change humanity for the better, upon sacrificing his soul to hell.
I am confused, I guess I'll just start with the basics. What temporary power does the lead have and how will his powers change humanity for the better?Not saying this isn't a good idea. I'm just saying the logline isn't quite translating the story as well as it could.
I am confused, I guess I’ll just start with the basics. What temporary power does the lead have and how will his powers change humanity for the better?
Not saying this isn’t a good idea. I’m just saying the logline isn’t quite translating the story as well as it could.
See lessJust when she starts fitting in at her new high school, 17 year old Maddie?s werewolf father goes on another killing spree, and she has to keep the dark secret from her new school crush.
How much does the audience know? Do we know her father is the werewolf from the beginning or is it a 'big reveal' halfway through? Also, does your lead character have any other goals you can use for the logline, like saving her father or saving her friends? Because keeping a secret is kind of a passRead more
How much does the audience know? Do we know her father is the werewolf from the beginning or is it a ‘big reveal’ halfway through?
Also, does your lead character have any other goals you can use for the logline, like saving her father or saving her friends? Because keeping a secret is kind of a passive goal.
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